9.8.15

A Suitcase Story, Part 2

Sunday's Snippet

Refer to last Sunday's post for the start of this short, A Suitcase Story that Ry and I are riffing off of one another to write.



She slides through her phone contacts as the RPMs rise, tapping Special Agent Blank's number and steeling herself for the next steps.
The Imprezia stalls at a red light. "Damn it," Kim thinks, "why don't I know how to drive a stick?"
Flustered, she checks the rear-view and stares directly at the government plates of a black Suburban.  "How the hell..." she mumbles, pulling the phone to her ear and turning to squint through the smoked glass at the driver's familiar silhouette.
Agent Blank and his annoying smirk are in the Suburban behind her. Kim has been dodging him – and the rest of the agency – after the Miami fiasco last month. Her report showed that the drug-runners hadn’t been responsible for the ocean fire, but Blank didn’t want to believe her. 
She watched him laugh deeply and heard him as well, her body tensing at the sound. "You rang, my dear?" his syrupy voice crept from the phone's speaker.  His eyes maintained their lock on her as he commanded, "Get in the truck."
"I'm driving," Kim snipped. "So pull over then." Her body obeyed before her mind had a chance to react.
The drive was quiet. Blank focused on the road, hypnotically weaving between semis and minivans on eastbound I-64. The mile sign read 15 to Evansville before he spoke. "It's time you knew Billy's whole story," he said, nodding to the glove compartment.  "Open it."
Kim cut a glance at Blank. Reaching for the knob, she knew that whatever was inside would change the way she looked at Blank, Billy, and the world. "Blank, listen," she started as Blank slammed on the brakes, causing her head to pound against the dash.

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